Jun 24, 2023 16:17
11 mos ago
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Japanese term

どなたかと一緒に

Non-PRO Japanese to English Art/Literary Cinema, Film, TV, Drama
Dear ProZ members,

I have a quick grammatical question about the following sentence. A middle school girl has been bullied by one of her classmates, and her mother is angry at her teacher who overlooked the situation.

今度いらっしゃる時は、学年主任の先生か校長先生か、どなたかと一緒にいらしていただけますか
(The next time you come, could you please bring one between the head of her year and the principal?)

Is this translation correct or should it be translated as "the head of her year, the principal or someone else"?

The first translation works better in the context, and the comma after 学年主任の先生か校長先生か seems to conferm it. However when you have Xか誰か the meaning is usually "X or someone else", so I'm a bit unsure.

Thank you so much!
Proposed translations (English)
4 +5 someone with you {see note}

Proposed translations

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someone with you {see note}

Your "between..." construction seems off to me, and "the head of her year" is also unclear. I'd suggest: "The next time you come, could you please bring someone with you, such as the head teacher for her grade or the principal?"
Peer comment(s):

agree Michael Hughes
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agree ZT-Translations
1 hr
agree Yukari H.W.
1 day 9 hrs
agree Avantika Srivastava Ganjoo
4 days
agree Y. Iida
27 days
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